Archive for October, 2008

“Lonely As A Cloud” A beautifully written poem

I Wandered Lonely As A Cloud by William Wordsworth

I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o’er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced, but they
Out-did the sparkling leaves in glee;
A poet could not be but gay,
In such a jocund company!
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

I really found this poem to be very relaxing. I think the rhythm is great and the use of personification is nice too. The poem gives you a great visual of an experience the speaker had. The speaker talks about being alone and taking in this beautiful sight of swaying daffodils, all in massive rows like the stars at night. He or she goes on about them beside the ocean and the sound of the waves, however he or she describes this scene so beautifully. The speaker then goes on to say how the moment he had steals him away while he is alone on the couch. In the last lines the speaker says “For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,-They flash upon that inward eye-Which is the bliss of solitude;-And then my heart with pleasure fills,-And dances with the daffodils.“ This describes how he goes back to the scene. I love the ending. It gives me a feeling that his experience is not only soothing but rhythmic as well. Maybe its just the use of the word dance that associates me to rhythm.

I think the point of this poem is how the simplest things in life can take us back. I also think its important to have this happen to us in life. Sometimes its nice to stop and watch things around us happen and find the beauty in them. It is also nice to have something in our minds we can always go back to when we need a little vacation. I think this is what the poet was trying to express in this poem.

My favorite lines are “Continuous as the stars that shine-And twinkle on the milky way,-They stretched in never-ending line-Along the margin of a bay:-Ten thousand saw I at a glance,-Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.” To m these lines give me a great visual of how many daffodils and also how they are swaying in the breeze. The poet did a wonderful job throughout the poem of describing the scene but I like how he uses stars and the milky way to describe the flowers.

“Indeed, Indeed I Cannot Tell” A poem of “a pure impartial hate.”

 


Indeed, Indeed I Cannot Tell

by Henry David Thoreau
 

 

Indeed indeed, I cannot tell,
Though I ponder on it well,
Which were easier to state,
All my love or all my hate.
Surely, surely, thou wilt trust me
When I say thou dost disgust me.
O, I hate thee with a hate
That would fain annihilate;
Yet sometimes against my will,
My dear friend, I love thee still.
It were treason to our love,
And a sin to God above,
One iota to abate
Of a pure impartial hate.

I like this poem because I can relate to it. I went through a messy relationship and this poem sums up how I feel towards this person at this point in time. Maybe not true hate because I don’t “hate” anyone. The poem is literally about the speaker going back and forth between the feelings of love and hate toward a person.  The speaker is unsure of which one he is leaning towards. It is difficult for the speaker to say. Obviously he has gone through something similar to what I and many others have been through. I really like the rhythm; it is very simple and constant and has a beat. It is a simple rhythm that follows this simple idea of “Do I love you still or do I hate you?”

My favorite lines in the poem are “One iota to abate-Of a pure impartial hate.” What the speaker is saying that a small amount of this feeling of borderline hatred, will lessen gradually.

I think the most powerful lines are “Surely, surely, thou wilt trust me-When I say thou dost disgust me.-O, I hate thee with a hate-That would fain annihilate;” The speaker is saying believe me when I say you sicken me, I hate you so much that this hate, with a smile on my face or happiness behind it, would destroy you. I didn’t put it this way only until I really studied the language used. I noticed it is very straight to the heart for the reader it was intended for.

“Would-Coulda-Shoulda” by shel Silverstein (We’ve all said this before)

Woulda-Coulda-Shoulda by Shel Silverstein
All the Woulda-Coulda-Shouldas
Layin’ in the sun,
Talkin’ ’bout the things
They woulda coulda shoulda done…
But those Woulda-Coulda-Shouldas
All ran away and hid
From one little Did.

 

    I really like this poem. It is very short but has a nice rhythm to it. I think all the stressed syllables give it that rhythm. Even though it is a child’s poem published in children’s books, I think it sends a strong message to all. It is very inspirational to all to do things and not ponder what should have been. I think every one has said “Woulda-coulda-shoulda” and I find it interesting he uses slang in this piece. The phrase is what makes it relatable to people of all ages.

     The poem is very fun. I love the metaphor he uses. He uses the slang as a group of subjects. I’m not sure, but I think this is a case of personification. He gives action to a common phrase. I like how when I read it, I get a sense that the phrase is a group of children lounging in the sun complaining about what they should have done. Then I think of the “did” subject chasing them away. It is almost like the “woulda-coulda-shouldas” are ashamed when the “did” shows up. I think this is a great analogy for children to get the right message of positive and negative actions.

 

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